Friday, August 14, 2015

Writing Term 3


Writing Progressions 1P:
I am learning to

  • add some detail to my writing
  • choose words to make my writing more interesting
We wrote about about a Kapa Haka Performance that we watched in the auditorium during Māori Language Week.  First we wrote 2 sentences and then the next day we added some more writing to make our stories more interesting.


"I like writing about my mum, going on holiday and with my mum's friends.  I can use the word cards and sound out the tricky words.  I can put a full-stop at the end of my sentence."
Madeleine

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

You are able to write independently now Madeleine. You are writing interesting stories and are able to have a go at writing tricky words. You are able to write a lot more now so keep working on this as your goal.